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    Cheesy Daft Punk Poetry

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    Yargh, as a writer, I could not resist the temptation to write cheesy Daft Punk poetry. So this thread will be used for the posting of...cheesy Daft Punk poetry, obviously.

    Black leather clad figures
    With helmeted heads.
    Gold and Silver,
    Clashing in colour,
    Tall and short,
    Opposing in height.
    Dissimilarities blended
    In beauty.
    Such sweet contrasts
    In music united.

    Cold metal hands,
    Austere sillhouettes.
    Black visors are voids
    Where faces once smiled.
    But from metal fingers
    Comes shivering life
    A life that is brimming
    With love and with light.
    Such sweet contrasts
    In music united.


    [Yeah, I had to dip pretty deep into my supply of cheese to write this. Also, to clarify, this is not meant to be brilliant. XD]

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    its funky none the less...

    i lol'd
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    [quote1206215261=Dark_DJ]
    its funky none the less...

    i lol'd
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    I was lolling at how terrible it was as I was writing it.

    My fingers are angry at me. I've brought shame to them by making them write that.

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    Haaar...

    seriouslyit aint that bad (I got a B grde in my gcse english so...)

    but id like to see what else you can do!

    and everyone else for that matter...

    (insert poem here...but i kinda dont DO poems...)
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    [quote1206216429=Dark_DJ]
    Haaar...

    seriouslyit aint that bad (I got a B grde in my gcse english so...)

    but id like to see what else you can do!

    and everyone else for that matter...

    (insert poem here...but i kinda dont DO poems...)
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    I'm no good at writing about specific topics, really...when I find inspiration I act on it, but I'm terrible when I try to force myself to write about something. XD

    But flanks for commenting. XD

    You should try, though, to write a poem.

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    who me?

    never!

    iam seriously terrible!i try to ryme too much!!

    and its no prob commenting...i hate to see threads disused...mine never get a good look in =[
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    OMG I never even considered poetry about Daft Punk. I am so so glad you do consider it.

    Can we write filthy limericks now?

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    [quote1206217158=Dark_DJ]
    who me?

    never!

    iam seriously terrible!i try to ryme too much!!

    and its no prob commenting...i hate to see threads disused...mine never get a good look in =[
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    Yes, well, this thread reeked of phail even as I was writing it. But I'm no stranger to phailure.

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    wellwhat an epic phailure!

    @ tomatorama: write filthy limerics at will mon frend!
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    [quote1206219040=tomatorama]
    OMG I never even considered poetry about Daft Punk. I am so so glad you do consider it.

    Can we write filthy limericks now?
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    Limerick away!

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